Wednesday, June 8, 2011
Quality Blog Comments
Hello Miss Yollis and students it is so interesting the way that you wrote your post. Wow it’s so great how your student are telling the world so many things that we don’t know.
Did the naked mole crawl in a tunnel underground? It is so great how you captured the action instead of just writing a whole tot of boring stuff. Well done!!
We looked at a post by Mrs Yollis' class and practiced writing quality comments for them.
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term 2 2011,
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Dear Chyna,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your nice words about our animal posts! It was very exciting to have the animals in our room! My favorite animal so far has been the fennec fox that we had today. He was so little, except for his ears!
We didn't get to see a naked mole, only a picture! Strange how it has no eyes!
Your pal,
Mrs. Y♥llis
California